"You're not an idiot." Snape looks at him. "You're a good man, Gregory." He smiles faintly. "Mostly."
I'm with Snape--this Greg Goyle is a good man. I love your characterization of him as a listener and a watcher and a craftsman and (especially) as an against-the-door kisser. Also, the "feminist dialectic" bit from Hermione made me smile.
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if it's Snape you fancy, then it's Snape you fancy
Neat. Simple. I don't know what kind of analogy I've played there, but I do know I love your fiction.
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I'm with Snape--this Greg Goyle is a good man. I love your characterization of him as a listener and a watcher and a craftsman and (especially) as an against-the-door kisser. Also, the "feminist dialectic" bit from Hermione made me smile.
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