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femmephantom

Fanfic - DBSK - Make a Wish - YooSu - G - Oneshot

Mar 26, 2009 15:57

Disclaimer: If you recognize it, it ain’t mine.
Fandom: DBSK
Pairing: YooSu
Rating: G (and again, I’m deeply ashamed of this)
Word Count: 252
Genre: Fluff. And cheese. We’re talking Velveeta here, people.
Summary: Short scene between Junsu and Yoochun. In which Yoochun is ridiculously cheesy.
( Make a Wish )

pairing: yoosu, status: complete, fandom: dbsk, genre: fluff, fanfic

Comments 23

donnofrio March 26 2009, 21:30:37 UTC

Fluff!!!!
This was really cute!!!! I think it's my first time reading about Su making a wish over an eyelash. ^^ *huggles him*
And Chun is cheesy but that's his biggest charm!
Thanx for the candy!! =DDD
And I love your poster! It's awesome!

femmephantom March 26 2009, 22:57:18 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

And we do love Chun for his cheese...well, one of the reasons we love him, anyways. ;)

You're welcome. And thanks! Wish I could say I made it, but it was done by the oh-so-wonderful tinseltown16. :)

simply_min March 26 2009, 21:33:54 UTC

lol. so cute. haha. everyone still loves yoochun whether he be cheesy or greasy! XD

femmephantom March 26 2009, 22:58:12 UTC

Thanks for commenting! And I think we love Chun because he's cheesey and greasy. :D

simply_min March 27 2009, 02:36:06 UTC

rofl! so trueeeee!

kim_sora March 26 2009, 22:46:24 UTC

It's short,but really cute! Somehow i easyly imagined the jumping around junsu,,and yoochun will be there to stop him, haha! I'm happy reading it,,thanx

femmephantom March 26 2009, 23:00:03 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you were able to see it all. I started out doing more than just dialogue, but I ended up getting trapped with all the "he said, he said" stuff. Le sigh.

Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad you liked it. :D

batmarg March 26 2009, 23:25:57 UTC

Aww. So cute! This is my first ever DBSK fic. :D

femmephantom March 26 2009, 23:50:49 UTC

Awww, thanks Marg. :D ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I'm glad you liked it. And trust me when I say that Yoochun is that greasy in real life. But I still loves him. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting!

micah88 March 27 2009, 01:02:23 UTC

“But Su, I can’t make it come true if you don’t tell me.”
I am SO in love with that line!
And Cheesypuff Chun is always ever so perfect!
Thank for sharing!

femmephantom March 27 2009, 01:14:19 UTC

♥ ♥ Thank you!

Yeah, that line came to me about a month ago and it's been torturing me since. I figured Chun is the only one who could get away with it. I have one more cheesetastic line that's botherin me, but everytime I sit down to right it, it comes out wrong. *shrug*

Thanks again for commenting!