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Bleach - RenRuki Fanfic - Let Go, 1/1

Feb 03, 2009 16:37

Disclaimer: If you recognize it, it ain't mine.
Author: FemmePhantom
Title: Let Go
Rating: PG-15 for language and some adult situations.
Genre: AAAAAAAAAAAAAANGST!!!
Spoilers: Absolutely none.
Word Count: 1,310
Summary: Felt like writing something angsty. This is the end result. It bounces around more than I'd like, and it went a ( Read more... )

status: complete, genre: angst, pairing: renji/rukia, fandom: bleach, fanfic

Comments 14

salzraender February 3 2009, 22:35:37 UTC

You know, you made me cry :( But fdjsweqdnukfzdl I so loved it :( I really can't say which part and which sentence I loved most 'cause all of it was so drama-renruki :'(
I was looking for new angsty renruki fics for so long now and it's so hard to find new ones and you so made my day, thanks a million for sharing!

femmephantom February 4 2009, 07:29:54 UTC

Awwww, I'm sorry I made you cry. Is secretly pleased, though. *passes you a tissue*

And thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you liked it. :)

kyoko_minamino February 4 2009, 00:50:25 UTC

Waaah. What is wrong with you? I already sniffle every time I watch episode 32 so this just dug the knife in deeper. I always enjoy reading your writing, though, because it really feels like we're under Renji's skin, feeling everything he's feeling in this fic. Poor baby. I want to snuggle him so bad despite the fact that I'm an IchiRuki gal. <3

femmephantom February 4 2009, 07:27:57 UTC

I'm sorry!!!! *offers you apology cookies* And episode 32 always hurts so good. ;)

Thank you for commenting, though. Renji is surprisingly easy for me to write. Whether he's being all angstilicious or adorkable.

And don't worry too much about Renji. He's...resting comfortably at the moment. ;)

michiru42 February 6 2009, 00:59:22 UTC

Poor Renji. Happy me with more fic. :) We can use this to tide ourselves over while the manga is off on its ridiculous fight tangent. (Kubo could at least show us how RenRuki are DOING, damn it!)

Loved the imagery. Rukia stumbling across Renji just makes you want to swear at both of them. And I liked how sweet the girl in the bar was. It would be easy to villainize her for sleeping with Rukia's Renji, but heck, she didn't know she was doing anything wrong.

femmephantom February 6 2009, 15:22:06 UTC

Ugh, Kubo is seriously starting to piss me off. Especially since he hasn't let Renji win a fight (on his own) since...forever. What's he doing to my poor Renji!?

And thanks for the lovely review. I didn't want to make the girl into a bad guy. SOMEONE should be nice to Renji. ;)

stace_s February 6 2009, 02:40:15 UTC

D= That is. SO. SAD. ;~; Poor Renji and poor oblivious Rukia and Ichigo who just want to help but don't know they're the problem.. You made poor Renji's depression so tangible here and I just hurt for them, 'specially poor Renji!

You're such a good writer, do it more often! XD

femmephantom February 6 2009, 15:19:59 UTC

Ahhh, thanks hon. Angst is so easy to write for Renji. So is his adorkableness...actually, he's one of the easier characters for me to write. Maybe that's why I love him so.

XD

And I'll try to write more. Thanks for the encouragement. I haven't written anything in so long, and this one just flowed out of me in like, 40 minutes. It was a great feeling.

stace_s February 6 2009, 23:07:30 UTC

And you write him so well. =) I agree, there's an ease about his character when it comes to writing him that some of the others don't have. But "easy" or not, I still love the way you capture him.

And yay for writing more! ^__________^

femmephantom February 8 2009, 21:04:46 UTC

Awwww, thanks hon. And Renji is easily one of the easiest characters to love in that show. At least for me. ;)

trito_chan February 9 2009, 21:35:45 UTC

Okay this was fucking amazing and you just pulled me back into the RenRuki fandom (not that I ever really got out of it, it's just that for a veeeery long time I haven't read, written or thought anything RenRuki).
Damn it...damn / poor Renji. T.T
But you did soooo good with this story, I love it when I read a story and I get that heavy, regretful feeling in my chest. To me, that is a definite sign of great angst!!!

femmephantom February 10 2009, 01:41:17 UTC

Lady Tina!!! you remembered!!! ;)

Awww, thanks for reading, hon. And I'm glad you approve. And is it wrong that I'm happy that it made you sad? ;)

I just felt like writing some angst, and it's so easy for these two. IF ONLY THEY WOULD SIT DOWN AND TALK TO EACH OTHER!!!! Then they could live happily ever after. *pouts*

Thanks again for the lovely review. :)