Glimpses 'verse fic: "Five Times Jan Winchester Knew Better Than Her Daddy - PG13

Nov 05, 2007 00:03

1. I think possibly the schmoopiest fic I write is about parent-child relationships. This is...I dunno, I'll share anyway.
2. Soy nog! The tastiness of nog, but not as heavy and guaranteed salmonella-free.
3. I had no internet pretty much since I posted the other day. I fixed it, yay! But I'll never catch up. Oh well.

Title: Five Times Jan ( Read more... )

my fic: faith/dean, my fic, glimpses 'verse

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girlguidejones November 5 2007, 16:44:41 UTC
You KNOW I have serious, total love for this. Because Jan *is* smarter than her daddy, and Dean is so very proud of her for it, just like he loved Sam unreservedly for the same reason.

Not eating the crusts is totally cheating.

"Good job with the sensitive parenting" made me think immediately of FNL's Julie Taylor, another girl who calls her dad Daddy (sometimes).

I love that Dean misses Sam and wants Sam's kind of pizza. And that Dean makes her call him Daddy, and that simply "Dad" is not permissible. And when Faith said there was no escape, and they all laughed it made me sigh, because it really made it clear that the wound was healed.

Your schmoop was schmoopier than my schmoop.

Love this, up to and including the coda. griN

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femmenerd November 5 2007, 18:14:52 UTC
I was not aware that there was a schmoop contest going on!

And I'm so glad you enjoyed this - you've been there right from the beginning. :)

And Dean is so totally "Daddy." It was fun here trying to imagine him being both simultaneously still ridiculous and also a totally loyal parent. [Because I'm of the opinion that people don't suddenly become entirely different people when they have kids.] Huh, kind of like how he is about being a son and brother.

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girlguidejones November 5 2007, 18:22:19 UTC
...trying to imagine him being both simultaneously still ridiculous and also a totally loyal parent.

Uh, yeah. That bit where he was hoping boys weren't an issue, but was simultaneously offended at the notion that they weren't attracted to Jan was so very Dean. *smishes*

I really, really do love this.

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girlguidejones November 5 2007, 19:41:12 UTC
I am a dork sometimes. The left out the whole reason I brought up my own schmoop to be begin with.

We both [at nearly the same time] were writing Dean almost exactly the same with regard to an outsider finding someone he loves (Jan or Sam) hot. It's a combo of "back the fuck up off of what's mine, asshole" and "why WOULDN'T you be looking at her/him. S/he's hot!" You've got teenage boys looking -or not yet- at Jan, and I've got a trucker ogling Sam's ass. In both cases Dean's flash of worry/irritation is overcome by his pride and love.

It's kind of neat, I think, that he's so well-defined in our heads that two people writing het family fic and incestuous slash would characterize him almost identically.

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femmenerd November 5 2007, 18:15:24 UTC
I hit you in your sappy parts! ♥

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strangevisitor7 November 5 2007, 18:22:00 UTC
Yay Jan is back. Love her to pieces. You definately write the best daddy Dean.

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femmenerd November 6 2007, 05:00:18 UTC
Thank you so much. Jan-love makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. :)

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lafleurdumal_gs November 5 2007, 19:07:24 UTC
I love this verse!

At the commercial break, Faith grabs the remote and presses mute, leaning over Dean to say directly to Jan, “Look, what Mr. Articulate is trying to say is that if you like girls, we’re cool with it, okay? Okay.”

Daddy!Dean is just awesome :D

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femmenerd November 6 2007, 05:01:17 UTC
Thank you! Daddy!Dean is just a joy to write.

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satyrnfive November 5 2007, 20:51:20 UTC
*wipes sappy from eyes* :)

I just love everything about this verse. A while back you let me add one the stories in this verse to Supernaturally Twisted. Would you be cool if I added your other Supernatural Crossovers too? They'd be here: http://www.spntwisted.com/viewuser.php?uid=474

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femmenerd November 6 2007, 05:06:31 UTC
Hee! Thank you so much. And sure, go ahead, you can add other stories if you'd like. I have tags for both Glimpses 'verse stories as well as other Faith/Dean fics AND other Crossovers (almost all of which are SPN crossovers). [There's some overlap there, but also I'm pretty sure that each of the tags may well have stories that the others don't--I should probably clean that up at some point.]

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