Summers at the Cottage, Black sisters, PG

[dora_the_nymph]

Title: Summers at the Cottage
Author: dora_the_NymphRating: PG

Comments

[rayvyn2k]

Wonderful. I love the changes you made. It really works...it's very melancholy and lovely.

[livii]

This is a great story, I love the look at the Black sisters, and the way you drew in the canon as well (the idea that Regulus first saw the cave this way is fantastic). The writing is really good, and overall it works very well. Lovely work.

[dora_the_nymph]

Wow. Thank you for the fantastic review. I'm glad you liked it.

[livii]

I decided to rec this on the crack_broom as my last gen rec for the month; the link is

[dora_the_nymph]

Wow! Thank you so much. (although the link didn't appear there, I'll just look at the community).

[ex_cutekeepe118]

Wait, wait - am I dreaming or did I once read that you said you didn't write? If I'm remembering correctly, then you are hideously mistaken. You WRITE, and you write beautifully! This was amazing! The interplay between the sisters as they matured and Narcissa's development was wonderfully done. You wrote them in-character even as children, which is amazingly hard to do (and you made me almost like Sirius. Almost.) Seeing glimpses of the women the girls would become as evidenced in part by their reaction to the Muggles was a master stroke, too, and nice foreshadowing with Regulus. This was fantastic!

[dora_the_nymph]

Wow. Thank you. I was grinning like a loon after reading this. I'm sure I did say I don't write, but now I am doing more and reviews like this definately urge me on.

And I'm so glad you liked the characterisations, and well. Liking you nearly like arsehole man. I am honoured!

I liked the idea of the Muggles and how they react (and it was a way to show Andra being different and how she influenced).

*blushes* Thanks for the amazing review.