That was amazing. I love the pace and flow of it. Her thoughts moving from one topic to the next, but still so connected and almost painful. And the details of the house and Charlie and her fears... it just worked so, so well. I really loved this. Just powerful and insightful. Beautiful.
I'm glad I came upon this! I was really disappointed with what we saw of Ginny in Deathly Hallows, and you'd think I'd have turned to fanfiction before now to fill in the gaps. Your story has a really unusually convoluted tone to it, but it really works and flows well. You might want to find a beta, or go over it with a fine toothed comb though, as there are quite a few little spelling mistakes.
I completely agree with you. The Ginny we saw in DH was so submissive and I wanted to explain that; how much she was apart of saving the world. I'm really glad you thought the one worked well, I struggled for a long while trying to find something that really worked with Ginny's mind. Hopefully it sounds like the thoughts would sound if they were running through her head. Thank you for the review! -Em
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I'm really excited that you thought it worked!!
Gah. Thank you for the review, I'm so happy you like it.
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I'm really glad you thought the one worked well, I struggled for a long while trying to find something that really worked with Ginny's mind. Hopefully it sounds like the thoughts would sound if they were running through her head.
Thank you for the review!
-Em
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Thansk for the comment.
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