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Re: lovely! liseuse July 15 2007, 20:22:34 UTC
Thank you ever so much! I'm glad the canon spotting was fun, I had a blast putting them in.

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outofivanhoe July 24 2007, 20:15:24 UTC
That was very cool. Some bits of the characterisation did jar for me- Ron accepting Pansy more quickly than Harry, for instance, he always seems the least tolerant and open to new ideas of the trio to me. But the details of the war were wonderful, and Pansy's sarky commentary on the Order, and the point about various motives everyone had... Also Pansy's assumptions about Harry and Ron. ;) Lots of fun to read, as well, which not enough fics are.

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liseuse July 25 2007, 08:26:22 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and for such lovely feedback. I can quite see your point on Ron, but I'm going to excuse it by saying that when Ron first saw a village of murdered Muggles and witches he realised that all the help they needed was welcome. But I am veyr glad that the little details and Pansy's commentary worked for you, and yay! that you had fun.

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enchantedteacup October 28 2007, 23:08:15 UTC
This is fantastic so far! I love Pansy's characterization and dialogue. Remus was well written too!

♣ enchantedteacup

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liseuse November 24 2007, 16:12:35 UTC
Thank you ever so much! Sorry this reply took so long, but I am very very glad that this worked for you.

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