venturous1 - "The Morning After" [Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, PG]

[venturous1]

Title: Morning After
Author:   (venturous1 at LJ)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Warnings: canon character death, blood
Words: 1776
For: femgenficathon on LJ
Prompt: 69) "My wish is to ride the tempest, tame the waves, kill the sharks. I will not resign myself to the usual lot of women who bow their heads and become concubines." -- Trieu Thi Trinh (225-

Comments

[minervas_eule]

I love such meditative pieces, and yours has many fresh ideas inside, which I found well-imagined / interesting / charming, like the trio going to sleep in Dumbledore's bed, Hermione taking care of Snape's body right away, or the castle "healing itself".
My only point of critic would be that I remember that Hermione did not like to fly a broom at all, so she would have walked and then apparated....

[venturous1]

thank you for such a thoughtful review. its true, we never see her flying, do we?

[lazy_neutrino]

What a lovely, quiet, introspective piece. (I wrote 'peace' first, which sums it up, really.) I like the way you slowly move the day forward, from dawn to full sun: the first day of the new world. Lovely.

[venturous1]

thank you so much! I'm delighted that your read this.

[slytherinlinzy]

very nice--and yes she did fly a broom- I remember reading about her playing Quidditch with Harry, Ginny, and Ron at the Burrow-so she did fly, but not well--I think it was in GOF or OOP