Comments | femaleshinigami: [FIC] 121 Year Post #2.

femaleshinigami

[FIC] 121 Year Post #2.

Jan 06, 2009 23:38

It was supposed to be 2 parts. Now I have 3 planned, and I start to fear this fic -____- I don't like it for some reason, and would apreciate any feedback and constructive criticism, so I can make it better. This is still dedicated to Zazu, I hope she doesn't mind such sucky fiction dedicated to her ^^; I honestly tried ffor sap and fluff! But this ( Read more... )

challenge, quote inspired, 1+2, 121 year, 1=2

Comments 4

lilzazu January 7 2009, 04:54:27 UTC

T___T the Duo abuseeee T_____T

I thought collegestudent!Heero would come save the day XD

*pets the poor Duo*

femaleshinigami January 10 2009, 04:09:34 UTC

Heero can't always be there :P Duo is a big boy, he'll manage ^____~ Thanks for reading!

sharona1x2 January 7 2009, 10:51:34 UTC

I think the story is fine. I don't know why you're worried about it. I'm looking forward to Duo making something with his life that will show the other guys how much better he is than them. I also hope he and Heero get their happy ending together. They deserve it, after all they've been through. ^_^

femaleshinigami January 10 2009, 04:11:48 UTC

I guess I'm just insecure about my own writing ^^; I tend to feel small and unskilled compared to all the awesome writers out there :) Thank you for reading it, though, and for the nice comments :D I still don't have a clear drawn plot line for this, that's why the 3'd part is not out yet [that and the school work] But I can asure you it will have a happy ending :)