Ficlet: Alone

May 18, 2006 11:14

The last of the icondrabbles requested. It took so long because I couldn't fit all I wanted to say in just 100 words.

For comedy42 who wanted a drabble based on this icon:


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fic 2006, pairing: spike, fic, btvs/ats fic

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aschicca May 18 2006, 12:16:07 UTC
I love how you pictured everything so vividly, it's a powerful image you create here. I saw every bruise in my head and I felt his pain and loneliness clearly. Just wow!

And what with the 'there might be a sequel'?? You HAVE to write a sequel in wich Angel comes to rescue him and shags him senseless soon!

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comedy42 May 18 2006, 15:37:44 UTC
Fear not! It's an excellent, powerful depiction. The imagery conveys that dull pain of separation that he would feel. I would love to see a sequel. Great work.

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greenstone_j May 18 2006, 21:20:14 UTC
Ouch *sniff* and more ouch. my poor boy. You write his pain so well. *loves*

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trepkos May 18 2006, 22:07:20 UTC
Nasty cruel Scoobies.

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denied_heaven May 18 2006, 23:27:58 UTC
oh man thats so aching and cold and just.. guh
perfect
*hurts*

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