I love how you pictured everything so vividly, it's a powerful image you create here. I saw every bruise in my head and I felt his pain and loneliness clearly. Just wow!
And what with the 'there might be a sequel'?? You HAVE to write a sequel in wich Angel comes to rescue him and shags him senseless soon!
Fear not! It's an excellent, powerful depiction. The imagery conveys that dull pain of separation that he would feel. I would love to see a sequel. Great work.
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And what with the 'there might be a sequel'?? You HAVE to write a sequel in wich Angel comes to rescue him and shags him senseless soon!
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perfect
*hurts*
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