Fic: Closer III : I Broke Apart My Insides

[felisblanco]

Ok, here goes. After all my talk about how I interpreted things this first chapter might seem strange and in contrast with my own words. But it will all be explained soon, I promise. I'm going to call this whole thing Closer, with named chapters. No need to tell me they're not in the right order according to the lyrics. I know. Anyway, part 1

Comments

[zinnydark]

Oh, god, they'er both so... in pain!

Yes still want each other... hmm... me thinks they need some closure... ;)

Love Giles, thought. Little bastard. ~tickles him~

Now, this whole 'don't have to wait for updates' thing... how long DO we have to wait?

[felisblanco]

LOL. Glad you like. But then again you are a h0r for pain, aren't you? *pets you*

Now, about updates... I 'm planning on one chapter a day. That enough for you? That should give you almost a whole week of agony. *eg*

[zinnydark]

~gasp~ you answered comments right away!

~rubs it in~

[felisblanco]

I know! I must be coming down with something. *feels forehead* Don't expect it to happen again.

Hmmm, which is better? Replying to comments now (almost 4 months later) to Part 2 or just singing lalala and hoping people will forget about them? *headdesk*

I need a secretary, damn it. Which would have to be a clone of me since it would be rather cheap having someone else answer for me. Apparently they do clone cats these days...

[nashmaveric]

Oh God. ::is speechless::

[felisblanco]

Thank you! *snuggles and snogs*

[spikesfool]

I'm so thrilled you're going on with the story. I loved the first two parts. Very hot and dark. Made my knees all wobbly. I can't wait to see what will happen next, how the boys will hurt each other, bleed for each other, then hopefully lick it better. *eg*

Smooches you. Yay for a chapter a day!!! It's so wonderful to have a new obsession to look forward to.

[felisblanco]

Yay for such wonderful feedback! *hugs you* I'm so glad you liked the first two and I truly hope this will meet your expectations.

And don't worry, there will be plenty of hurt and even some licking. *g* Those boys... what is it that makes us love hurting them so? *pets them*

[bittersweet_art]

Oh sweet Jesus! It's so good, I'm having a hard time breathing!!!

They hurt so much! You are such an amazing writer, you made me feel everything they felt, the chaos of thoughts in Will's head...

Damn! Thank god you have it all written, I couldn't bare waiting long for more!

[bittersweet_art]

..again I'm so excited that I can't type... Bear goddammit!

[felisblanco]

There, there. Take deep calming breaths. Picture Spike naked... ok, maybe not. Calm breaths, calm breaths!! Picture a lake! And... flowers! And... naked boys making out... ok, I'm so not helping.

Thank you so much for your very kind words. I'm glad it came through, all the turmoil inside Will's head. And I promise you, one chapter a day. Obviously this week is angst week. *eg*

Ps. Your icon is absolutely gorgeous

[pet_23]

IT'S FINISHED??

OH NOOO!!

Must be more...must, must I say.

*looks, looks some more*

OMG!! So Intense it can't be over yet. Just can't. *snif*

Itwas so sad, he is so truly fucked up. But that doesn't mean I didn't love it I did. But STILL!

*kitty eyes*

[felisblanco]

Nonono, not finished finished, I just meant it's all written out and ready to be posted. 5 more chapters before you can start crying again. lol

So glad you enjoyed it. And it won't be angsty all the time, I promise. There might even be some smut.. somewhere...

*smooches you*

[pet_23]

THANK GOD!!

~smooches~