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felisblanco

Fic: A Temporary Child

Aug 14, 2013 03:04

A Temporary Child
inspired by At the Back of the North Wind by George MacDonald
421 words( His eyes are big and bright and blue like cornflowers... [Warning for child's death] )

fic 2013, fic, original writing

Comments 6

candygramme August 14 2013, 03:25:02 UTC

*cries*

Damn you! That hurt.

masja_17 August 14 2013, 08:25:07 UTC

So hurtful.

*crying*

ferrous_wheeler August 14 2013, 08:35:14 UTC

I think that the mark of a good writer is someone who is able to make feel something through their words, and you certainly succeeded with this! No names, or character background, but it doesn't needed it to be wonderfully deep and sad :) :'(

kindredspirit75 August 15 2013, 00:14:07 UTC

Very powerful stuff.

matchboximpala August 24 2013, 02:28:23 UTC

Wow. Really beautiful, but so so sad.