Application for magicdraft
PLAYER INFORMATIONNAME: Rachi
AGE: 21
JOURNAL: rachiru_chan
AIM/PLURK/EMAIL: AIM: xxrachiruxx PLURK: rachiru
CURRENT CHARACTERS: N/A
CHARACTER INFORMATIONSERIES: Axis Powers Hetalia
NAME: Italy Veneziano
(otherwise known as Northern Italy, Feliciano Vargas, or Italy in general)
RACE: Not human, but humanoid in appearance. He is a nation, and as such his ( Read more... )
AGE: 21
JOURNAL: rachiru_chan
AIM/PLURK/EMAIL: AIM: xxrachiruxx PLURK: rachiru
CURRENT CHARACTERS: N/A
CHARACTER INFORMATIONSERIES: Axis Powers Hetalia
NAME: Italy Veneziano
(otherwise known as Northern Italy, Feliciano Vargas, or Italy in general)
RACE: Not human, but humanoid in appearance. He is a nation, and as such his ( Read more... )
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REVISIONS
The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification:
● Abilities & Powers - There is nothing here to indicate how Italy's strengths or weaknesses translate into HP 'verse magic. The application rules state: 'An explanation of how you think any canon powers will translate into Harry Potter 'verse powers (better at one subject, weaker at another)'. A re-working is needed on this section because of this. With your mentioning of how hard he is to kill, perhaps an aptitude for Defense Against the Dark Arts; this is the kind of insight and conversion from one canon to another that we are looking for.
Please reply as a comment to this comment so that the mods can see the changes made to your app. Thank you!
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