Hey Bab! Sorry for the late comment on this, real life got really in the way this week! ;)
OMG I loved this! Peggy's point of view of things was amazing to read. Something we didn't have in the movie, well.... maybe it's because the movie isn't about her! LOL
Good good job also on Steve/Nick convo. Loved it too. And I can easily imagine Tony's "WTH is happening face"!! LOL
I hope you will continue writing this, I really enjoy it! :D
Awww, thanks about showing Peggy's POV. I felt it was needed, especially after the camera just panned away from her misery. So sad. I know the story was about Steve but her story just struck me...
Steve and Nick...!! I loved writing them. I think he will make friends quicker with Nick and Thor than with Tony and the others.
Well, I have plenty to share. Up to chapter 7 so far! WOOT!!
I wanted to get inside these people's head a little and open things up so my readers can relate to them and want the best for them. That's especially true for Steve and Peggy. I just feel so bad for them!!
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OMG I loved this! Peggy's point of view of things was amazing to read. Something we didn't have in the movie, well.... maybe it's because the movie isn't about her! LOL
Good good job also on Steve/Nick convo. Loved it too. And I can easily imagine Tony's "WTH is happening face"!! LOL
I hope you will continue writing this, I really enjoy it! :D
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Awww, thanks about showing Peggy's POV. I felt it was needed, especially after the camera just panned away from her misery. So sad. I know the story was about Steve but her story just struck me...
Steve and Nick...!! I loved writing them. I think he will make friends quicker with Nick and Thor than with Tony and the others.
Well, I have plenty to share. Up to chapter 7 so far! WOOT!!
I'm happy you enjoyed it! :D
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I love how we're getting different perspectives in this story! We get to see where everyone's at. It's a nice touch! =D
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I wanted to get inside these people's head a little and open things up so my readers can relate to them and want the best for them. That's especially true for Steve and Peggy. I just feel so bad for them!!
Thanks for the lovely review. I appreciate it! :D
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