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Fic: The Things We Lost (7/?)

Oct 13, 2011 05:52

Title: The Things We Lost (7/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Tess, Oliver, Lex
Rating: T
Summary: Lois and Clark must accept the cruel reality of their separation as they try to get back what they had lost.
Word Count: 3,000
Spoilers: Dominion (10.19)
Disclaimer: DC Comics, Warner Bros. Entertainment ( Read more... )

fic: the things we lost

Comments 8

paradisekendra October 13 2011, 20:43:29 UTC

OMG---I love the Lois & Clark part. I love him watching her sleep (great description), them making love, and the discussion about him hurting her unintentionally, 'cause seriously, he needs to be told that. *WOW!* I loved it so much.

And Tess & Oliver too, 'course. I love the slight sarcasm you added in for them. I love that he expresses his love for her in a way that she still questions---she did most of the time, such little self-confidence. So in character, haha.

I just posted a chapter between Martha and Tess and I can't wait to hear your thoughts, as I eagerly await future things in this fic. OMG!

I love when you do the Clois/Tollie crossovers. Makes me muy happy!

*hugs you*

babettew54 October 15 2011, 19:50:51 UTC

Hey, I'm home and online! YAYY!! I actually finished this fic on my first night away with only a few 'research' things to finish up!! :D

You know I love writing crossovers with my favorite couples. They're a lot to fun to write, as well you know it!

Aww, thanks, the opening scene with Clark beside her in bed, sigh!! I so enjoy writing them this way. I can think of like two scenes where they were actually in bed together ... the one in my icon and their first time! Nice going Smallville! *smh*

Martha and Tess will work things out, shortly. I hope you like it.

The next chapter will be a doozy!! And thanks so much for leaving a comment over here! *hugs*

eternal_moonie October 15 2011, 17:49:56 UTC

Always and Forever will I love your fics!

Including this one!

Another GREAT chapter!!

babettew54 October 15 2011, 19:52:40 UTC

Awww, I'm so glad! You are awesome!! Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it! *hugs*

eternal_moonie October 15 2011, 19:54:46 UTC

As luck would have it, I updated The Secret Circle today :D

You're welcome honey, I always love reading!

babettew54 October 15 2011, 22:00:14 UTC

I will be reading it, definitely!!

As soon as I get through all my emails! *hugs*

athena606 December 3 2011, 01:16:04 UTC

Got nothing but love for this chapter!!

babettew54 December 3 2011, 03:20:58 UTC

Awww, me too hon! I couldn't keep them apart any more. It hurt like the dickens! :D:D

Thanks for reviewing!:D