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Fic: Redemption (5/?)

Aug 21, 2011 18:21

Title: Redemption (5?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville
Characters: Tess/Oliver, Lois/Clark/Kal-El
Rating: T
Word Count: 2,300
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Tess and Oliver see things differently now.
Beta: paradisekendra
Author’s Notes: In this next chapter, in spite of Oliver’s protests, Tess returned to work, but was it too soon, and later Oliver and Tess ( Read more... )

fic: redemption

Comments 4

eternal_moonie August 22 2011, 10:39:47 UTC

WOOHOO!!!!

Absolutely LOVE this pairing Tollie!!!

You can write any pairing!!

Keep up the great work honey!

babettew54 August 22 2011, 12:28:37 UTC

You don't know how nice it is to hear that! Thank you, hon! Writing Tollie is like pulling teeth!! Well, not quite that bad, but I did go around and around with it.

Oliver calling her 'sweetheart' felt weird to one reviewer, but Tess felt the same way too, so it's all good! I thought it was sweet.

Thanks again!:D

paradisekendra August 23 2011, 02:21:04 UTC

Such great writing! Feedback time! I love the way she doubts herself, I love the way he takes care of her. The way she forces him to be a hero...I love the way they work through all the 'issues' if that's what you'd call them. I love the romance you give them, the love beyond all the tension they have by default.

I loved this chapter. I think when Tess let's down her guard, she would be very dreamy-eyed with him, very, "You're my hero" two seconds before she'd smack him for some offensive comment. So I loved that you had her absolutely in love with him and wanting his affection.

Yay!

babettew54 August 23 2011, 11:51:19 UTC

... the love beyond all the tension they have by default.

That's the nail on the head there! The tension, the tension!!! WOW! Those two wrote the book on it, didn't they?? Combustible tension! I'm surprised they didn't burst into flames when they were in the same room together.

I tell ya, how could anyone compare him and Tess to anyone? It just was not there!! *hugs Tollie*

Hehe! Love and smacks in the mouth go hand in hand, don't they?! At least it does with our favorite ships!! :D:D

Thanks so much for coming over here to leave a rewiew! *hugs*