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eternal_moonie August 1 2011, 15:13:12 UTC
Absolutely AWESOME new chapter honey!!!!

Can't wait for more!

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babettew54 August 1 2011, 15:40:59 UTC
Thank you sweetie!! *hugs*

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ctbn60 August 2 2011, 00:20:31 UTC
THis is an interesting development. I can't wait to see what jane tells him.

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babettew54 August 2 2011, 01:27:10 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! Very interesting, indeed! This is the first time I've ever used amnesia in a story and I like the drama of it! :D

Update later this week! :D

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repmetsyrrah August 6 2011, 11:35:01 UTC
So glad I finally got time to read this (admittedly more 'in the right frame of mind to read this' but… yeah, I'm here now :P).

Loved it!! I knew Lois would approve of Jane and of Clark's relationship with her- just as I'm sure Jane's late husband would be pleased to see her happy after he's gone (wait, Jane can see the dead now, her first husband is dead… is that going to come up?!)

I'm glad Jane finally went to see him though I think I can understand why she was reluctant. Can't wait to see what she tells him.

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babettew54 August 6 2011, 12:22:05 UTC
Thank you sweetie! I have a bit of catching up too... I'm happy you made it over!

No, Jane will not be seeing Bill again. He did make an appearance in her dreams early in the story, but no, not again.

I felt it was important that Lois and Jane make some kind of connection and making eye contact was a start, but I felt more was needed, so I added their conversation.

Coming up! Clark and Jane's talk will be interesting; I will say that. Update soon!

*hugs*

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