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eternal_moonie June 30 2011, 09:21:34 UTC
WOOOHOOO!!!!

Absolutely LOVE this chapter by far the most so far!!!

I loved the (sorta) introduction of the two new characters!!

Keep up the great work honey!!

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babettew54 June 30 2011, 09:33:07 UTC
Thank you, hon! *smiles* You know I'm a tease, have to leave you wanting more. And you know there's more!!

I'll try my best! :D
*hugs*

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repmetsyrrah June 30 2011, 13:22:26 UTC
Oooh, the thick plottens :P

I can't wait to see how Clark brings this up to Jane, I hope he's not too angry at her but he kept secrets form Lois for years, he should understand…

Interesting about the visit to the nuclear power plant. Was there someone else there or is this another mystery...?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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babettew54 June 30 2011, 14:10:59 UTC
I can't wait to see how Clark brings this up to Jane, I hope he's not too angry at her but he kept secrets form Lois for years, he should understand…

I knew you get where I'm coming with Jane keeping this secret from everyone. She has done it her entire life, so it's hard for her to give up that information. Clark will listen to her explanations and not judge her too harshly.

Yes, there were guards there of course, but ... Neutron was invisible, but Clark did catch a brief glimpse of him inside the plant. He's very powerful and invulnerable. A true threat..

Thanks hon! Are you left yet for your holiday??

So, so sorry to hear about another quake. So sad.

I just printed your next chapter for Revelations! Very exciting..

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nary1 July 1 2011, 16:27:07 UTC
Finally! now we know the villains of the story I just wondering how Jane's power come to be handy ;)great update!!

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babettew54 July 1 2011, 17:53:41 UTC
Yes, the villains of the story! Not too familiar to everyone and that's how I wanted it. I didn't want folks to draw any conclusions about how the League would be able to stop them!!

Jane's powers?? Humm, yes, could come in handy! *winks*

Thank you hon! Update early next week!:D

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ctbn60 July 3 2011, 02:07:22 UTC
I know they are worried about Clark but I'm glad Clark is giving her a chance to explain and not just running off. So the bad guys are out in the open so to speak. Cant wait to see what happens next!

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babettew54 July 3 2011, 02:25:12 UTC
Clark understands what she's going through. He of all people knows about keeping secrets, important secets, so I thought he should take the understanding route until he has a chance to talk to her.

The villains are out there and no one knows who they are, but they are part of the DC universe and very powerful too.

Thank you hon for coming over!! Update early next week! :D

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