Oh, loved this one! Glad to see Lex finally got what's coming. Though I don't think he'd be Lex if he just lay down and took it now would he?
I loved Lois' thoughts at the start too. I'm not a mother but I've spent enough time inside my Lois and Clark's heads to know how they'd react to anyone threatening their kids :P I've heard parents in real life say they'd kill without hesitation to protect their kids too.
Thank you!! Luthor thought he could get away with 'blackmail,' so typical!
This chapter was the stuck part of my story. I wasn't sure where to go or how to get Clois out of this mess. Lois finding Luthor and putting him in jail definitely helped their cause, but that still didn't help my muse in finding a solution. I slept on it for a week or so, but I think it worked (within the system) to keep him quiet at least for Clois to have some peace for a long time.
It's a good thing weapons aren't allowed in jail houses, huh?!! I love Lois!
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Keep up the great work!!
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I loved Lois' thoughts at the start too. I'm not a mother but I've spent enough time inside my Lois and Clark's heads to know how they'd react to anyone threatening their kids :P I've heard parents in real life say they'd kill without hesitation to protect their kids too.
So once again, another awesome chapter!
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This chapter was the stuck part of my story. I wasn't sure where to go or how to get Clois out of this mess. Lois finding Luthor and putting him in jail definitely helped their cause, but that still didn't help my muse in finding a solution. I slept on it for a week or so, but I think it worked (within the system) to keep him quiet at least for Clois to have some peace for a long time.
It's a good thing weapons aren't allowed in jail houses, huh?!!
I love Lois!
Thank you again. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :D
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