Despite th first chapter was not exactly a success (nobody has read it or at list commented) ='( I wanna try again with the second one ^_^''' This chapter is almost entirely made of Ariel and Derrik's picture, enjoy
I wouldn't worry too much about no one (other than me now) reading your first update. I think there's something about familiarity and so as people continue to see your posts it will peak their interest and they'll take a look. Usually by the second or third generation you'll have a decent amount of followers. Fiki Fiki, is there like a literal translation to this? I mean I know they were woohooing...oh is that what the Italian version of the game called it? I mean like I said, I totally understood and love that you used the expression, it's just out of my own curiosity that I'm asking.
Also you forgot to translate one of the lines. It's the one about exploring the cave.
Ari's gorgeous! I hope her red hair stays in the family! And damn that Derrik, he's so fickle! Hope to see kidlets soon? Don't worry too much; all first legacies start off slow, comments-wise :)
Like the other two said, as you keep posting you'll notice more people reading your legacy, just be persistent. But this is turning out very cute, both Ari and Derrik are very good-looking, I'm excited to see some kids :)
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Also you forgot to translate one of the lines. It's the one about exploring the cave.
Can't wait for your next update! :)
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And damn that Derrik, he's so fickle!
Hope to see kidlets soon?
Don't worry too much; all first legacies start off slow, comments-wise :)
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