Black-and-Red Conflict - Ch.27

Oct 04, 2008 19:39

Pairing: Renji and Byakuya
Rating: PG (overall M)
Spoilers: for the end of the SoulSociety arc
Discl.: Bleach and all its characters are (c) to kubotite. I do not make money with this.
Content: Byakuya is an arrogant bastard, says Renji. Abarai is an impertinent nuisance, says Byakuya. Unfortunately for them, opposites attract.
Notes: so sorry that this ( Read more... )

renji, bleach, brc, fanfiction, byakuya

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schiannath October 7 2008, 08:49:33 UTC
As interesting and complex as ever!

I'll be looking forward to more.

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marinliliz October 10 2008, 17:42:45 UTC
Ahh another decisive chapter that you manage to leave undecided. It may not look like it but this is a compliment, you have an ability to leave things linger unsolved, adding to the angst of the story, which I find very interesting, as an author and a reader.

I cannot, not point out the description of the cherry and plum trees and how it makes Byakuya reminisce of Hisana. It was beautiful.♥♥

And Byakuya's indecision (strangely so like mine) all things solved in the dark of night, all problems with a solution in sight and in the daylight, all the drive vanishes with the shadows. If not for Renji I don't know how he will, will himself to act.

Oh and as i said before, ice-breaker of the year: "So... ya always puke when you're happy?" XD

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feathers_of_ice October 14 2008, 17:32:09 UTC
XD no, i think i understand that compliment, though i think many readers rather react to that like "rubbing knuckles in imagination of hitting the author" :P

so glad you liked the plum/cherry tree part, i had that pic in my head and really wanted to get it out. still a bit short, but i hope it'll be enough for my illustrator to work with ;)

wasn't that sentence of renji's mean?! man, i couldn't believe it myself that i had written/he had said that! that sounds crazy... doesn't it?

thaaaaaaaaank you! for your beta-read, and for your insights in your reviews!

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bundamba October 14 2008, 09:41:05 UTC
I don't know quite what to say, I acciedently stumbled onto this chapter then immediantly started from the first and have spent all day reading you work.
It's all absolutely brilliant and it is going to shit me to tears to have to wait for the next installments!!
* I think i am going to go crazy...lol.*
Thank you for sharing

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feathers_of_ice October 14 2008, 17:29:09 UTC
XD thanks so much! always great to catch new readers ;)
yeah, i know waiting is a dread... but then at least there is one good point, which is that the story is ready in my head and i know what happens. so i hope to get it out without much more delay... but then that's what i always hope °-° anyways, thanks for your comment!! :)

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chironstar November 29 2008, 12:02:26 UTC
OMG NEXT CHAPTER SOON PLEASE!!!

Seriously, I love this fic so much - marathoned all the previous chapters I missed, but bloody hell, this fic is one of the most brilliant ByaRen fics I've ever read. (Awww, c'mon Renji, just give Bya one more chance?) Please don't keep us in suspense - update soon! :)

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feathers_of_ice December 6 2008, 21:39:20 UTC
next one coming right now ;) sorry for the wait...

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chironstar December 7 2008, 01:26:50 UTC
No problem - good things come to those who wait, it's what they say! :)

*runs off to read*

PS. Wanna be friends?

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feathers_of_ice December 7 2008, 07:51:09 UTC
mhh do you mean if you can like, list me as friend? of course you can ^^

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daxemon March 3 2009, 08:16:16 UTC
Poor Byakua, I feel for him and Renji of course, but time will tell.

So jealous about your trip to the mecca of manga and anime.

Have fun.

Later

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