Pairing: Renji and Byakuya
Rating: PG (overall M)
Spoilers: for the end of the SoulSociety arc
Discl.: Bleach and all its characters are (c) to kubotite
Content: Byakuya is an arrogant bastard, says Renji. Abarai is an impertinent nuisance, says Byakuya. Unfortunately for them, opposites attract.
Notes: alright..... i know an apology really is needed
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now me goes to read... ^_^
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love it every time you write form Bya's point of view
though the Byakuya-realizing-what-he-did-and-deciding-to-change-in-a-single-hour-or-so part, was a tiny bit ooc :P
and thanks for mentioning that Renji planed to go to the rl to fight, so early in the chapter
it made the ending less an unexpected punch
I guess it has to get worse to get better,
and Bya got a great chance to be eh-eh nice to Renji ^_^ during his healing >:]
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thank you!
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thank you very much... i'm glad i have readers giving me feedback like that!!! ^^
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Anyway, what I meant at the end is that Byakuya has it too easy-- he identified the problem, found the solution, tidied it up in his mind, got back to work-- his response was so smug and intellectual in some ways that I just wanted to kick him in his pants. Despite his emotional response, he was still playing mind games. So Renji missing is a great way to go! Great jolt!
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