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FIC: Fundamentals of Chemistry (Community, Troy/Annie)

Jan 02, 2010 16:04

Title: Fundamentals of Chemistry
Fandom/Pairing: Community, Troy/Annie
Rating: PG
Summary: "What's up with Annie lately?" Troy asks. It's been on his mind for a few days now, this something-different-about-Annie, and it seems worth the risk of asking the group as a whole.
Length: 6,000 words.
Notes: Written for the Yuletide 2009 challenge.

( After Annie leaves the study group early, Troy looks around the room and taps his notebook with a pencil. )

my fic

Comments 20

htbthomas January 2 2010, 21:21:18 UTC

Yay, thanks for posting this to the comm! ♥

fearlessfan January 4 2010, 05:06:59 UTC

Thank you so much for telling me about the comm, and again for the lovely comment you left me over on the Yuletide archive!

Also, I love your icon!

htbthomas January 4 2010, 11:36:14 UTC

Thanks! I make a set after every episode (from ep 101 to 112 so far), and that comes from my 110 set. :)

peasantings January 2 2010, 21:34:56 UTC

Oh, gosh I'm so glad you posted this to LJ ♥

I remember reading this over at Yuletide and loving it so much, but felt bad because I couldn't comment due to having no idea how to.

So, I just want to tell you that I loved this. Especially the scene where Abed compares Annie and Troy to Ross and Rachel on Friends. (And Jeff/Britta to Dave/Maddie on Moonlighting. It felt so in-character for the both of them!

fearlessfan January 4 2010, 05:08:23 UTC

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that the Ross/Rachel, David/Maddie thing worked for you - I actually spent an embarrassing amount of time coming up with a list of emblematic TV couples Abed might think of, and so I'm glad that turned out to be time well spent! :)

Thank you again for taking the time to comment, and I love your icon!

jdphoenix January 2 2010, 22:39:24 UTC

He's been carrying around pieces of her without knowing it for years now

That line was just a perfect way to describe Annie's relationship with Troy, that line alone would have made this story great, but everything about it was absolutely wonderful from start to finish. I can think of nothing that was the least bit superfluous, it all flowed perfectly and had an amazing feel to it.

Reading this has totally made my day. Thanks so much for sharing!

fearlessfan January 4 2010, 05:09:11 UTC

Thank you so much for saying such kind words about the story! This comment left a huge grin on my face, I can't even tell you - thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it.

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fearlessfan January 4 2010, 05:10:00 UTC

Thank you so much! I've come to love Annie more and more as the season went on, so it's great to hear that she came across well in the story. Thank you so much for the comment!

lavender_basil January 3 2010, 01:41:10 UTC

I love this fic! As I've told you, it really captures the sweetness of the show and tenderness between Annie and Troy. Well done, you!

fearlessfan January 4 2010, 05:10:32 UTC

Thanks, buddy! You were a lifesaver while I was writing this - thank you so much, for everything!