Comments | fe_contest: Challenge 008

kittykatloren in fe_contest

Challenge 008 - Lost on the Wind

Sep 13, 2010 21:44

Words: 2845
Characters: Fury, Levin
Time: During 1st generation and in between the generations
Genre: Drama/Romance
Author's Note: I know Seisen is a much lesser known fandom, but please give this a read and consider for a vote, I suppose ^^ About the story: it was hard to understand Levin's personality in the 2nd gen. compared to 1st gen., but after ( Read more... )

game: fire emblem 4, user: kittykatloren

Comments 8

sarajayechan September 14 2010, 03:10:20 UTC

OMG SEISEN I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY SEISEN WRITER HERE :DDDD

This was amazing. I loved that you addressed the tension between second-gen!Levin and Fury and how the conditions Levin is under have really complicated their marriage and the relationship of the family in general. And the first part was just super sweet.

kittykatloren September 14 2010, 03:22:16 UTC

You are not alone! :D I am very much in love with Seisen! So many wonderful pairings... Anyway, thank you so much! :D

shining_valor September 14 2010, 17:06:38 UTC

Heartbreaking second part after the fluffy first part. :P

Forgive me for having nothing more to say. -_-'
I has no knowledge of this world and its characters, so enjoying the interaction is all that I can appreciate with any authority.

kittykatloren September 14 2010, 19:04:04 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting anyway! :)

myaru September 24 2010, 20:18:01 UTC

OH LEVIN you smooth talker. <3 I love this pairing to bits. I'm hoping to get it in my own playthrough (whenever I pick the game up again, that is). I really like the way you characterized them, as well as their relationship. Unfortunately, having only played mostly through chapter two, I can't say much more for its context with the rest of the game. Still loved it, though. <3

kittykatloren September 25 2010, 05:40:58 UTC

Thank you very much ^^ You should try and get through the rest of the game when you have time, it really is epicness incarnate. x3

penandpaper71 October 4 2010, 02:45:01 UTC

Unfortunately, my knowledge of FE4 is still shaky, but I still found this enjoyable to read, which I think speaks to how well you wrote this fic. I love how you portrayed the characters and the way you developed the story.

Excellent work. This story was wonderful to read.

kittykatloren October 4 2010, 02:53:21 UTC

Thank you for reading, even without having played FE4 ^^ Glad you enjoyed it!