Comments | fe_contest: #006: "A Friendly Wager"

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#006: "A Friendly Wager"

Jun 30, 2010 23:23

Title: A Friendly Wager
Game: Fire Emblem: Rekka no Ken
Word Count: 895
Pairings/Characters: Matthew, Serra, Hector/Farina, mentions of Erk/Serra, brief Oswin
Warnings: Sexual innuendo, possible endgame spoilers

( That means if you win, I'll call you Lady Serra and bring you cool, refreshing drinks. And rub your shoulders and feet whenever you ask. )

user: sarajayechan, game: fire emblem 6/7

Comments 7

wolfraven80 July 2 2010, 02:25:27 UTC

He can't spend all his time...fornicating!

Oh dear, I laughed when I read that! This was really funny. Nicely done!

sarajayechan July 2 2010, 03:06:12 UTC

For some reason the Serra in my head put it that way. I wondered if maybe I should change it to something more flowery, but it was too funny so I left it in.

Thanks! :D

shining_valor July 2 2010, 10:48:07 UTC

My! Humor! ^_^

I think laughter is the only appropriate reaction to this. It's funny! Serra and Matthew are into mischief and then floored by Oswin. And Hector and Farina are incorrigable. Ostia is doooooomed!!! Doomed, I say!

LOL.

penandpaper71 July 3 2010, 00:54:51 UTC

Oh, this is great. ^_^

The interaction between all the characters is just fantastic in this. The banter between Matthew and Serra is amusing. And Oswin is just great in this fic. I adored his last line.

kittykatloren July 5 2010, 01:28:29 UTC

"only her devil-may-care attitude and desire to flout convention matched his own, and raising hell was always better with a partner."

REALLY NICE LINE. xD What a great story. I'm reading this on the porch of a closed public library in a town of 500 people, and I laughed out loud, and a bunch of the locals just stared at me. Good moment.

Though I'm a Lyn/Hector fan in general, I like this story because the whole atmosphere it sets is fantastic. xD

mark_asphodel July 6 2010, 21:13:36 UTC

This was hilarious. Comedy gold. I haven't smiled so much over an FE story in a long, long time. The best part was that it never really became silly-- all the characters seemed well-grounded in the situation. And props for the Oswin love.