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Prompt 2: flowers

Apr 14, 2009 21:03

Title: Wild Flowers
Author: cheshirejin
Rated: G
Genre: general
beta: kira, thanks girl!
Words: 230
summary: Haru contemplates over a field of wildflowers.

( Hatsaharu Sohma... )

author: cheshirejin, prompt 2

Comments 4

kiramaru7 April 15 2009, 04:16:00 UTC

*sighs* Beautifully done, Jen! I have a soft for wildflowers too & if I find pretty weeds I leave them be. *is sure my neighbor who fusses over his garden hates that* ;p This really spoke to me!

I would love to see you write more Haru one of these days! ;D

tasukigirl78 April 15 2009, 13:11:42 UTC

Loved it. It was wonderfully done! I love Haru's voice in this. Also like the comparison of him and the weeds :D

furousha April 15 2009, 16:12:33 UTC

wow! Beautiful story! I love how the weeds fit in with Haru's personality! he definitely does what he wants. :D

coastal_spirit April 16 2009, 20:07:53 UTC

Beautifully written. I can picture this, almost feel it.

Weeds didn’t care to stay in the confines of a flower bed; they tended to go wherever the hell they wanted. They stand out in the rain and the sun where they thrive, even when nobody wants them around; especially when nobody wants them around.

That's my favorite line. It's so like Haru.

Good job!