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Prompt 16: Passion

Feb 21, 2010 21:48

Title: Controlling Her Passion
Author: landofthekwt
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Passion (fb_fics #16)
Word Count: 384
Pairing: Shigure/Akito
Warning; None
Summary: Shigure manipulated Akito’s passion

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prompt 16, author: landofthekwt

Comments 5

quirkysmuse February 22 2010, 13:51:51 UTC

Ooh, nice intense emotions here, and perfectly characterized. Fantastic work.

landofthekwt February 22 2010, 14:25:43 UTC

Thanks. Hatori was actually aware of the way that Shigure was manipulating Akito and warned him of the consequences.
In the end Shigure got what he wanted because Akito had to turn to him. He took away her passion for the Zodiiac, but she still had her anger for him.

kiramaru7 February 22 2010, 21:18:53 UTC

WOW! that was sooo intense & powerfully written!! I loved it!! Akito is one of my fave characters & I think you did an awesoem job of writing her here!

landofthekwt February 24 2010, 05:39:10 UTC

Thanks. Akito is my favorite character. I love her passion. Shigure is the only person who can redirect her passion toward him.

kiramaru7 February 24 2010, 19:41:06 UTC

You're welcoem! I love her passions too!! *nods*