[Pikame] I can’t stop falling in love with you

Oct 15, 2012 22:39


Title: I can’t stop falling in love with you
Pairing: PiKame (Guest appearance by Jin, Ryo and Nino)
Genre: Bitter sweet fluff
Summary: Sometimes love is stronger than a man's convictions.

Author’s Note: This was specially written for Lori-chan for the recently wrapped up pi_exchange. Dear, hope you'll forgive me for tweaking the ending a bit, coz after I reread ( Read more... )

pikame, !! fanfiction !!

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sweetspicyhot October 15 2012, 16:25:25 UTC
Spot--yes ha ha I will comment again. Forgive you for tweaking the ending? What is to forgive? I get to read more of your fabulous words!!!! (plus I already peaked and there is more mention of Nino! Yay So I will say again, I love love this fic. Am on vacation this week but will comment properly as soon as I can! Hugs to you!

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mouter October 15 2012, 22:18:24 UTC
The storyline is quite simple and so on, but it should be like this in romance I suppose. I love your Pi, who is cute and a little bit stupid too. I found hilarious reading about "red-alarm" and Ryo who somehow was mocking Jin a little. And Kame-chan is cute as always. And this thing with cookies. It was just too sweet. Love it!

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tokoyam1 October 16 2012, 00:34:50 UTC
Kyyyaaaa...
PiKame so sweeet~
and nino.. wow.. funny boy..wkwkwkwk

thank you ne..

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romapi October 16 2012, 00:52:36 UTC
it's more sweet that the last ending. lol

thanks for the fic! wait it's not for me *pout*

>.<

Ne, still thanks! love it!

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saharasnow82 October 16 2012, 01:32:20 UTC
Okay, this was awesome.

Kame and Pi were too cute together even when they weren't officially together. My favorite moment had to be when Kame came home from work and he was just relaxing on the couch with Pi. It was just so simple, sweet and intimate.

It was so precious when the Haagen-Dazs made its appearance at the end of the fic. Poor Shuuji was lonely without his Akira.

Loved the appearance of the Akanishi troop and their attempts to help Pi with his feelings. I couldn't help busting out laughing at Jin and Ryo's reaction to Kame "seeing" Nino.

Honorable mention to Nino and the work he put in to pushing Pi over the edge which eventually brought him to confess.

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