Fic- Crazy over you 3/5

Sep 30, 2009 21:07

Series Title- Crazy over you 3/5 ( Read more... )

rayne, fic, firefly

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miere85 October 1 2009, 18:28:42 UTC
Great update. I think Kaylee did pose an important question ..what is going on in Jayne's head ? I would totally like to know. Thanks for the update and can't wait for the next.

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faythbrady October 3 2009, 15:08:04 UTC
Wouldn't we all? It's probably messy in Jayne's head.

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jellie_rayneluv October 2 2009, 00:05:48 UTC
That was so great. Love Kaylee's rambles. You can't halp but laugh. This series is highly enjoyable.

Favorite lines:

"Anyhow I was gonna stick around because Jayne was lifting weights and that was entertainment enough.

What? Just cuz a girl’s bought what she wants don’t mean she can’t window shop. Ain’t no one can take the place of Simon but sweaty Jayne ain’t exactly hard on the hormones, dong ma?"

and

"He reaches down and tugs his shirt out of his pants and pulls it over his head showing us both the hottest gorram bare broad chest and gleaming muscles I seen outside a dirty mag.

So now I’m drooling fit to drown but River just nods as Jayne goes back to his work out like he ain’t the sweetest piece of tasty she’s ever seen."

How right you are. Yummy mental images. Thanks for giving them to all of us.

I'm sure the Captain Tightpant's and Simon's parts won't be as "happy" as Kaylee's. Can't wait to see them.

More please soon.

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faythbrady October 3 2009, 15:12:11 UTC
your wish is my command. check out Mal's turn.

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