Comments | faynia: [Fic] Bonds of Water 19/20 (NC-17) HP: HP/SS

faynia

[Fic] Bonds of Water 19/20 (NC-17) HP: HP/SS

Apr 15, 2007 15:56

Title: Bonds of Water (19/20)
Author: faynia and stormypup
Pairing: Snape/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4336
Genre: Romance, Angst, Drama
Summary: Harry has never been entranced by music before now, but he is willing to do anything to learn how to play the same melody.

Beta'd by rakina.

Previous Chapters:
Chapter One
Chapter Eighteen

( Chapter Nineteen )

!fanfic, fandom: harry potter, fic: bonds of water, pairing: harry potter/severus snape

Comments 23

erisedraine April 15 2007, 20:50:08 UTC

:) Aww, I'm so sad that there is only 1 chapter left!!

I loved the awkward sex! Too many stories have perfect sex scenes, I'm glad this was more realistic (besides the fact that Snape isn't human, hehe).

faynia April 15 2007, 21:00:21 UTC

We loved writing the awkward sex! Too many times bonding sex was perfect and lovely and wonderful and we were like. Pish, with this fic? Perfection, yeah right. Let's see what can we do to make it bad but still good for our boys *taps chin* ((I actually asked one of my best friend's who happens to be gay whats the worst couple of things that could happen during sex...strangely he knows I write slash and totally accepts it cause I'm that weird))

erisedraine April 15 2007, 21:02:43 UTC

ROFL. It's all about the gay boys knowing about our love of slash. To one of my friends, I proclaimed my love of slash early, and that was one of the reasons he felt comfortable coming out to me, because he knew I didn't think it was odd. XD

lilyeyes April 15 2007, 21:24:19 UTC

WOOT!! Oh nice, very very nice!!!

faynia April 16 2007, 01:09:57 UTC

:D

Thank you!

hambares April 15 2007, 23:09:42 UTC

Good for Severus for reading up on teh how to's of sex! I think he gave Harry a wonderful first time.

faynia April 16 2007, 01:10:31 UTC

I think he did to, even if they did flub up in about a million different times along the way.

snarry_fan7 April 16 2007, 00:04:45 UTC

I loved the awkward (and realistic) sex and that they are now bonded. I'm sad though that we only have one more left, but I'm sure it's going to be amazing just like the rest of the story!~Sophia

faynia April 16 2007, 01:13:48 UTC

I'm so glad everyones enjoying the fun semi-realistic sex.

xandrabelle April 16 2007, 00:20:24 UTC

OMG, smut! *fangirl squee*

"Greedy, bossy, bottom," Snape said approvingly.
Somehow this line summed it all up for me. I love Harry as the greedy bossy bottom. And Snape to approve of it! LOL!

Great sex scene and in case I wasn't clear enough, I enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. I can't wait for the last chapter. All in all, a terrific fic!

faynia April 16 2007, 01:14:53 UTC

Thank you. I think we all like Harry as the greedy, bossy, bottom. He's more fun when he's desperate and whiny ;)