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Little Steps (1/15)

Mar 17, 2007 03:39

Title: Little Steps (1/15)
Author: faynia
Pairing: Snape/Harry, references to past Draco/Harry, and Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4788
Genre: Drama, humor, angst, eventual Romance
Summary: A potions accident turned Snape into a toddler, and now Harry is expected to look after a young Severus until the potion wears off.
A/N: Some of you may have ( Read more... )

pairing: hermione granger/ron weasley, pairing: draco malfoy/harry potter, !fanfic, fic: little steps, fandom: harry potter, pairing: harry potter/severus snape

Comments 17

sakitokun March 17 2007, 08:20:08 UTC

Haha. You mentioned me ^.^

I'll read it tomorrow since it's 4 in the morning here ^.^ So you didn't have it beta'd? How did I miss that lol. I think you have mentioned it before but I thought you were re-editing it. Can't wait to read it again!!

faynia March 17 2007, 16:27:20 UTC

Your icon just slayed me XD

But yes! You were mentioned! hahahaha

sakitokun March 17 2007, 23:30:22 UTC

Haha yes I know. It's one of my favourites and oldest out of all the icons I have. Here is the other one I have.

*hugs* Hehe

On with the story.

Oh I do see the difference, there is a lot more emphasis on the detail. Which is a good thing ^.^ A lot more description! Keep going!!

marie2love March 17 2007, 09:40:37 UTC

This is adorable. I don't remember ever reading the original. I had to use this icon because every little one needs a teddy. I am looking forward to the next part.

faynia March 17 2007, 16:30:44 UTC

Thank you! Sev needs a bear *nods* And the original while not spectacular writing wise showed my progression in writing in probably the best way ever. Its really wild it looks like two different authors wrote it without regards to one another. So yeah, don't bother reading it hahaha

hambares March 17 2007, 13:13:17 UTC

I don't think I read the original. But I did enjoy this first chapter! Cute little toddler Severus..*pets the little one's head*

faynia March 17 2007, 16:31:04 UTC

*pets him with you*

teleens_journal March 17 2007, 19:45:26 UTC

I really, really, really like this - pretty please, if it's complete, don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

faynia March 18 2007, 20:46:08 UTC

I'll try not too!

teleens_journal March 19 2007, 05:37:31 UTC

Thanks!

amethyst_snape March 17 2007, 21:47:01 UTC

Ah, yes, I remember reading your old story :D You have improved since then ;) Look forward to reading more.
But, does Severus only age till age 5 with the potion, and then age normally or will he forever stay the age of 5? That part confused me :P

faynia March 18 2007, 20:47:06 UTC

Hahaha, yeah it wasn't tackled in this chapter because I believe it was brought up in the second originally >.> and if it wasn't it will be now!