Comments | faynia: [one-shot] A Black Rose. HPSS. PG13

faynia

[one-shot] A Black Rose. HPSS. PG13

Feb 14, 2007 18:05

Title: A Black Rose
Author: faynia and stormypup
Pairing: Snape/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Categories: Romance, Humor
Summary: Snape abhors Valentine's Day, but Harry loves it. Who will win this battle?
A/N: I made willyluvsnicky beta this chapter, because I know how much she likes to tease me about improper comma usage.

( A Black Rose )

!fanfic, fandom: harry potter, pairing: harry potter/severus snape

Comments 27

witchdragon February 15 2007, 05:24:18 UTC

So sweet!

faynia February 16 2007, 02:23:35 UTC

Thank you!

mutsumi11 February 15 2007, 22:41:48 UTC

It's very nice - I loved it ^^
Though I do think that Snape was more canon at the beginning, where he sneered at everyone and so on... then he got softer and softer... hehe~ I don't think that is bad - I like both canon and 'soft'-Snapes...
And I loved jealous!Snape!!!

faynia February 16 2007, 02:24:55 UTC

Soft Snape is only bothersome when he's there the whole fic...unless the fic is in a series of others then its ok.

And god jealous!snape is fun. Thank you for the nice comment!

gershwhen February 16 2007, 00:43:37 UTC

Very nice!! It was romantic with a great many little touches to really set it apart. (I do with Harry had found out that Snape had set all of his Valentine's on fire...) Thank you for posting.

faynia February 16 2007, 02:26:05 UTC

Hahahaha we actually had to edit the fic to have Harry mention them at all towards the end. We completely blew them off *headdesk*. Sometime we might write something where Harry finds out the Snape exploded them, although I highly suspect Harry knew he'd do so and that was part of the fun.

chiralove February 16 2007, 02:20:42 UTC

Very sweet! I love the in-character romantic side of Severus, and grown-up Harry, and the way the two of them just ... work, despite all of the snark and difficulties. Perfect! :)

faynia February 16 2007, 02:26:56 UTC

Thank you very much! Severus is hard to write as a romantic...he doesn't do romance well. Course that doesn't stop Harry in any way shape or form. Ah well.

tvals01 February 17 2007, 04:16:41 UTC

great story! i have a feeling you were been deliberately obtuse in that little part of" ...a year ago, before we got together..." was it that harry had feelings for ss before he left for the muggle life? or are you planning a continuation of this story?
ty:)

faynia February 17 2007, 04:24:09 UTC

Hadn't thought of a prequel before, but this story definitely begs for one, doesn't it?