[fic] Let the Rain Come Down (Sekaiichi Hatsukoi)

[faye_naruse]

Title: Let the Rain Come Down
Universe: Sekaiichi Hatsukoi
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Yokozawa->Takano
Fic Type: One Shot
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2000
Alt. Link: FF.Net
Summary: Takano kidnaps Yokozawa for a trip to the ocean. Yokozawa is forced to face him and reality.

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Comments

[keishiiikeis]

This is a very well-written fic, I feel like you just did justice to all that he's done for takano and the characters are fantastically, well, in character esp for the exchanges of witty banter and its a great supplementing text to what has occurred between them from what the manga pieces together, enjoyed it very much!

[faye_naruse]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the compliments, and I'm glad you enjoyed ♥

[animaven]

Interesting point of view from Yokozawa, who is not portrayed as a sympathetic character usually. It's easy to forget that he did so much for Takano, and he does love him, unrequited love, and friendship is really just not enough.

[faye_naruse]

In Onodera no Baai canon, Yokozawa is very much an antagonist so I'm glad I was able to portray him as sympathetic here. Thank you for commenting!

[dyoklako]

angsty but good. thank you for writing and sharing this with us. :)

[faye_naruse]

Haha, I do love my angst. Thank you for commenting~

[amimousou]

angst and i love yokozawa
thank you for sharing~

[faye_naruse]

Thank you for reading! ;) Glad you love Yokozawa too~

[live_in_shadow]

nicely done. Poor Yokozawa always ends with short end of the stick if you look at it from his prospective rather than onedera's.

At least he gets someone who loves and works just for him later on. (Kirisima you cad, always teasing yokozawa all the time)

[faye_naruse]

Sorry this reply is coming so late ;;

Thank you! Yes, poor guy... I'll admit he was a bit of a jerk to Ritsu, but that doesn't mean he deserved to go through the pains of an unrequited love for so long :'D

Very true! Kirishima has ended up fitting him much better than Takano anyway~