H50 Fic: The Eleventh Hour 12/13

Mar 03, 2011 07:05



A/N: And the resolution begins :) Thank you!  Previous parts here.

It came back in flashes. )

fic, the eleventh hour, hawaii five-0

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ratherastory March 3 2011, 14:34:40 UTC
Aww, Steve. You're breaking my heart, bunny. :(

I kind of want to wrap him in a blanket and feed him tea and pet him and tell him it's all going to be fine. Except he would probably just look at me weird and refuse to budge from Danny's side anyway. *sigh*

Don't worry, Steve! Danny's a tough little haole. He'll be fine, if only so he can wake up and rant at you for being a giant quasi-suicidal freak who got him shot. :D

I can't believe the story's almost over. I feel like I've been hanging off the edge of my seat for months now.

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faye_dartmouth March 7 2011, 13:57:47 UTC
Steve definitely needs some love after this fic, even if he doesn't know how to accept it :)

Hopefully the ending isn't a let down!

Thanks :)

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kitmerlot1213 March 3 2011, 14:46:09 UTC
A gorgeously emotional update!

They'd gotten into this together; they'd get out of it together. Steve had promised, and Danny had trusted him.

Good for Steve for wanting--needing--to be there for Danny and I think his guilt over what happened to his partner is going to weigh heavy on him.

Keep up the great work on this fic :)

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faye_dartmouth March 7 2011, 13:59:44 UTC
It's really all about emotions, no matter how much plot there may be :) That was why I wanted to write this fic in the first place.

Thanks!

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faye_dartmouth March 7 2011, 14:00:48 UTC
Dying sunlight is a phrase I've always liked using, so I'm glad someone else appreciates it, too :)

Danny's reaction will be the core of the last part. Hopefully it doesn't disappoint.

Thanks!

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sgflutegirl March 3 2011, 19:40:30 UTC
What a great chapter. I just want to give Steve a big hug and never let go.

Can't wait for the end, but I think I'll be sad that it's over. This has been a fun ride.

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faye_dartmouth March 7 2011, 14:01:06 UTC
He really does need a hug.

Thanks!

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