Twilight fic: Singing in the Dead of Night 2b/4

[faye_dartmouth]

Chapter 1

Chapter 2a

Comments

[sendintheklowns]

There is so much going on in this chapter, I don't know where to start.

Okay, I'll start with the hurt. First Jacob--emotionally--followed by Jacob and his leg. The poor Seth trying to help him gets hurt even worse.

I do think my favorite part is Jacob's realization that Seth had been hurt by his demotion. That conversation is very affecting.

How are you going to get these poor boys/wolves out of the pit?!

[faye_dartmouth]

I don't know why this chapter is twice as long as the rest. I must have intended this to be a five chapter but forgot to make one of the breaks.

Oh well :) Jacob and Seth get put through the wringer on this one--no need to prolong it for them :)

Thanks.