Comments | faye_dartmouth: GG Fic: The Ever-Growing Itch 4/4

faye_dartmouth

GG Fic: The Ever-Growing Itch 4/4

Jun 15, 2010 13:13

A/N: Hopefully all the build up is worth the reveal :) Thanks again! There should be more to the verse sometimes in the not so distant future, if I can ever get my act together to get it polished!

Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

( It was perfect. )

the ever growing itch, fic, redemptive!dean verse, dean forester, cute!dean, gilmore girls

Comments 5

medusafox June 17 2010, 11:55:13 UTC

Wow, I didn't quite expect the ending, but I liked it. I'm actually glad that it didn't happen. Dean had ALL the right reasons, although I do think he left one out. Maybe he was a little scared that if he let himself get too close to Rory too quickly, he'd end up hurt by her again. He'd be within his rights to feel unsure around her, she has dumped him twice before.

Well written. You have a real knack for capturing the characters realistically.

Thanks!

faye_dartmouth June 23 2010, 12:50:33 UTC

At the very least, Dean SHOULD be scared given his history with Rory. She doesn't exactly have a stellar track record when it comes to Dean, though I like to believe she may have finally grown up here.

Thank you!

pinkphoenix1985 June 19 2010, 17:26:06 UTC

you know how much I love your Dean and Rory and this story was no exception! I just love how you get Rory. That she can be very annoying and not such a golden girl.

And lol I love the Nora Roberts reference XD

I've been meaning to ask you--have you seen the new episodes of Royal Pains? I like it so far. Jill annoys me still and I would love more Tucker and Libby XD

faye_dartmouth June 23 2010, 12:52:41 UTC

Rory is the golden girl in the sense that everyone thinks she's perfect and she sort of believes it too--which just makes her more annoying.

And RP = AWESOME. Overall, anyway. Evan is ridiculously endearing this season, Divya is made of win, and they're doing a great job of showing both Hank and Evan's POV regarding their dad.

Jill? Is useless. And she has no chemistry with Hank. If I were the hospital board, I'd fire her. I hope she gets written off the show ASAP.

And I would so love to see Tucker and Libby again. I am holding out hope--they are by far one of the highlights of S1.

pinkphoenix1985 July 12 2010, 12:11:42 UTC

very true and honestly the same goes for Loreli in a slightly different way though

a great job of showing both Hank and Evan's POV regarding their dad. THIS!! YES! which is where Supernatural started great and than completely lost the ball on this one! not to mention demonizing John more in S4-S5...

I'm loving Henry W as their dad...

Jill just makes me cringe

I hope that we'll see them very soon!!!