Comments | faye_dartmouth: Primeval fic: Treading Carefully (Second Life verse)

faye_dartmouth

Primeval fic: Treading Carefully (Second Life verse)

Nov 29, 2012 20:58

Title: Treading Carefully

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval; feral Stephen was created by lena7142.

A/N: Another installment of the Continued Adventures of Feral Stephen. Beta given by the unparalleled lena7142.

Summary: Stephen seemed to operate under the impression that shoes were optional.

( Cutter held his breath as he watched. )

primeval, fic, continued adventures of feral stephen, second life verse

Comments 26

aunteeneenah November 30 2012, 03:43:00 UTC

feral!Stephen. Yeah, he's a good guy, just not easy to be around, it would seem. It would seem that he and Lester are going to come to an understanding, at least, about shoes, although, probably not about anything else. lol Enjoyed this but poor old Cutter. I'm afraid if Stephen keeps getting hurt, it's going to short Cutter's life span! Well done.

faye_dartmouth December 4 2012, 02:45:59 UTC

Yeah, Stephen has some issues with people skills. Poor Cutter has to put up with a lot :)

Thanks!

freddiejoey November 30 2012, 04:42:59 UTC

Love how Friday has also become feral Stephen day. And love barefoot Stephen here. Your Lester's brilliant too.

faye_dartmouth December 4 2012, 02:46:36 UTC

I am never sure when I write Lester so I'm glad he sounded right. Thanks!

goldarrow November 30 2012, 05:01:28 UTC

Beautiful; Stephen's need to be perfect is so touching and sad.

Cutter sighed. His proclamation from Lester had been delivered about as successfully as he’d expected. Which was to say, it was a complete failure.
LOL

*meep* for the Troodon scene. Had me on the edge of my seat; and I squeaked when Stephen went down.

LOL I figured Lester would end up compromising on the shoes, after that. The man may be stubborn, but he's a long way from stupid!

Lovely addition!

faye_dartmouth December 4 2012, 02:50:04 UTC

I sort of love how damaged Stephen is. It makes him so fun to write.

Thanks!

lukadreaming November 30 2012, 08:27:40 UTC

I like the way that it's often difficult to argue with Stephen's logic, much as Cutter and Lester might want to! And Lester may be annoying, but he's not a fool ...

faye_dartmouth December 4 2012, 02:51:12 UTC

Stephen has this way of being right about things even when it seems like he should't be. He's lucky he has friends who will put up with him.

Thanks!

natchris November 30 2012, 08:57:25 UTC

made me smile and sigh happily too.

Lovely!

faye_dartmouth December 4 2012, 02:52:36 UTC

I'm so glad. Thanks!