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faye_dartmouth

Suffer the Children (and the Geeks) 5/10

Jun 22, 2007 07:20

Title: Suffer the Children (and the Geeks) 5/10

A/N: I'm so glad that people are still reading despite the somewhat OC-focus. More action is to come in this chapter, I promise :) Next update will be later--I'm out of town for the weekend visiting a very cool friend, but I'll get the next one up as soon as I can. All other notes and disclaimers in ( Read more... )

fic, limp!sam, suffer the children

Comments 6

supernatrlmommy June 22 2007, 13:18:03 UTC

Absolutely awesome - with the action, the kids, Sam, Dean....all of it. Now I'm sad that you're going. But I am patient enough to wait for a few days for my next fix! LOL

Hope you have a great time and I'll be looking forward to your next chpater when you get back.

Kat

faye_dartmouth June 25 2007, 12:17:59 UTC

Well I wasn't gone long :) So now my next chapter's up...what about yours? Hmm?

ibelieveinsam June 24 2007, 07:01:37 UTC

This was definitely my favorite chapter. I loved how you included that part about Jess. I teared up because it was just so sad to think about :( Why can't they ever give us something like that on the show so we can get more of a glimpse into Sam's head.

The scene with the exhibits coming to life was so intense! My stomach was in a knot. And you speared Sam! For that, you are awesome :D Sam feeling guilty about Liam and thinking he didn't protect him was so sweet too.

I hope you are having a fun weekend and I can't wait for the next chapter :)

faye_dartmouth June 25 2007, 12:22:49 UTC

Truthfully, that small reflective section about Jess is perhaps my favorite part of the entire piece. Sam had to have thought about kids with her to some degree, and I can just see him being so conflicted on it. I'm with you--the show should show us this stuff more.

I'm glad the exhibits were just corny--I was so worried about that :)

And Sam being speared is ALWAYS fun :)

I had a fantastic weekend, BTW.

Thanks!

skippy_peanuts June 25 2007, 07:39:59 UTC

im really liking this story and hope to read another chapter soon. aww. poor sam got wounded and daniel is not going to be too thrilled his little brother is hurt too. oh those big brothers.
anywho. interesting story.

faye_dartmouth June 25 2007, 12:24:28 UTC

I'm glad you're finding it interesting. And neither Sam or Daniel is going to be thrilled about Liam's injury.

Thanks!