Suffer the Children (and the Geeks) 2/10

[faye_dartmouth]

Title:  Suffer the Children (and the Geeks) 2/10

A/N: This chapter is heavy on plot stuff--kind of a necessary bridge to the more interesting stuff later to come. So I hope this isn't too boring of a chapter. And, yes, there's an OFC but don't fret too much about her. She's mostly a plot contrivance. Thanks to all who reviewed chapter one :) All

Comments

[supernatrlmommy]

This was a great update! Way to build up to the urgency of kids being missing. I love how you've combined the realistic worry they have to have of getting caught, of the authorities getting involved. And you did wonderful on their voices, again....can't wait for more!

[faye_dartmouth]

I'm glad this one wasn't too boring--it was a necessary step in the plot but didn't contain the most interesting stuff, IMO.

And it's always reassuring when they sound in character--that's the key to any good fic and it's not easy to do :)

[ibelieveinsam]

I am really liking this story. It's very suspenseful and I just know there is some big trouble ahead. I was on the edge of my seat when the things were flying off the wall. I liked how Sam saved the day with his tackle. I like how in character the boys are too. I feel like I'm watching an episode of the show. I could see Sam being the one to comfort the teacher while Dean thinks of flirting with her. I also thought the teacher was well written. I felt bad for her. I can't wait until the next part especially now that Sam is entering the museum alone ;)

[faye_dartmouth]

I really hate writing things with hunting plots because they're so HARD. I mean, I know nothing about this stuff beyond what the show tells us so I feel like I'm pulling it out of my butt half the time. So it means A LOT to know that it seems believable (in the way that we buy into the show, at least).

And Sam entering the museum alone? In one of my fics? I do believe I may be a bit predictable at times :)

Thanks!

[belleimani]

Very edge of your seat!