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Fic: P.U.O

Jun 13, 2009 19:42

Title: P.U.O.
Author: Fayding_fast
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1474
Spoilers: Minor for "Dying changes everything"
Con-crit? Yes please and thank you kindly.
Summary: Wilson has a raging temperature; poor boy.
Author's note: This fic was inspired by a line from an actual episode.

( P.U.O. )

p.u.o, house/wilson fic

Comments 2

This is great anonymous September 3 2011, 04:27:02 UTC

I particularly liked the use of a POV character who clearly doesn't understand what's going on, and the way you let the reader see snippets of reality through the cracks. You weren't too heavy-handed, just let us see through to the next level.

And House's...I mean, the CACTUS's last line is perfect!

Re: This is great fayding_fast September 4 2011, 14:41:47 UTC

Hi there.

Thank you very much for your comment. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.