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Comments

[northernwalker]

*sporfles* Very, very good!

[favoritebean]

Thank you.

[eternal_ot]

Ha! clever take...liked what you did here..:)

[favoritebean]

Thank you.

[mamas_minion]

very clever and I loved that in the end she gets a real cat. A pet cat to teach her son pet responsibilty sheesh. At least Dot was right on that point.

[favoritebean]

It's funny what thought processes go through the minds of parents. I attribute Mrs. Hundie's to lack of sleep. Glad Dot was able to set things straight at the end.

Thank you for reading.

[eska818]

am highly amused over the Schrodinger reference. I do wish this was less dialogue and more story, but overall, I enjoyed the piece. :)

[favoritebean]

It makes me happy that the Schrödinger reference did not go unnoticed. Yay!

I appreciate the crit. When I wrote the first draft, it was sort of in a sketch or play like idea I had in mind. I may toy with a version with less dialogue in the future.

Thank you for reading.

[adoptedwriter]

I like the pacing and dialogue here. Cute story! AW

[favoritebean]

Thank you!