bipolar!fic:: chapter one :: snow white beginnings

[faux_vive]

Title: WIP[bipolar!fic] :: chapter one :: snow white beginnings

Author: faux_vive

Rating: PG-13, higher in later chapters.

Pairing: Peter/Carl, Peter/Drew, Peter/Drew/Carl, Drew/Anthony/Peter

Warnings: only references to self harm, i think. oh, and maybe triggers for anorexics? i dunno. very cautious about these things, so i may over warn.

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Comments

[didzease]

Ohoh. Love the ending ^^

The rest is... realistic. Imo. ><
Showing scars, hah.

[faux_vive]

aw thanks...
yeah, i think the ending is the best part,
just cause its a bit more of an exciting setting
compared to the entering of the clinic.

and YAY realistic institution fic!

i felt that was sorta the best way to show the self harm honestly,
cause that's what the kids there do.
get in a circle around you and fire off questions.
it VERY intimidating ><

aw thankies for the comment, and for title suggestion!
luv them both

<3

[d666lisa]

I adore the way that you've characterized Drew, the last part is beautiful: "Some type of connection, something I had long forsaken myself, trapped in this barren land of my mind, slave to my moods and my poetry." ♥

[faux_vive]

thanks, i felt he was the one who best suited the part i needed him to play...
but... OH -zips mouth shit- i shan't tell you.
but something differs later on.
keep reading to know! XD

aw thanks...
it was sorta easier to make it beautiful because it was first person,
and in an environment pete was WAY more comfortable in,
so his thoughts are more poetic, if that makes sense.

thankies for the comment!
its nice when people actually think my writing is goodish XP

<3

[ladyland7]

I'm loving the personalities you've given the 3 boys. Very starkly atmospheric too, your hospital description.
And the ending is beautiful. Need more. x

[anonymous]

This is really awesome actually, i love the whole tone and atmosphere of it almost as much as your drew! Keep it up

[roxy_palace]

Wow...what a great voice you've got. I like it.