Title Still To Come....

[faust89]

O.k So Heres What I've Written Down So Far...Hope you Enjoy.....

"We will not rest until this disease is terminated!"A voice shouts from a large screen that brightens the dark streets.

"Congressman some ppl see this "Movement" of yours as a cruel and inhuman way of treatment.There have been reports about homes being invaded and and ppl being

Comments

[gabbz007]

its really cool! i think it has really great potential!

so who is donovan and selen?

[chocobayashi]

The beginning sounds alittle like a cross between V for Vendetta and X-Men. The congressman's speech, I mean.

The pace of this is good, I'd love to see it all storyboarded (and whatnot) especially all on Donovan's teleporting scenes.

[faust89]

it does.....i've always like that though like just getting straight to the point and what not...

i'll draw up a little story board juuust for you...lol