Bleach Fic: we beg lines

[fated_addiction]

I think I have the sniffles. It feels like it's been too long, guys. But this is for tosca1390. Who is the best of all things. And lets me subject her to various rounds of animes that I haven't seen, etc. Also IDEK what this is. I just have a lot of strange feelings when I get the sniffles.

we beg lines
they meet in the middle. step, parry, thrust. bleach

Comments

[tosca1390]

I AM WEEPING. HISANA LEFT. HE'S WRITING A BOOK. SHE'S THE FENCING CAPTAIN. MAKE OUTS AGAINST LOCKERS. THE SISTERS. SHUNSUI AS THE COACH.

I JUST. I CAN'T.

I will be more coherent in the morning when I'm not weeping into my pillow. HOW DO YOU WRITE HOW.

[tosca1390]

This is apparently my more coherent comment, however it's still going to be a mess. So.

THIS IS TOO MUCH PERFECT FOR ME TO HANDLE. I love Rukia and Karin as friends, the parallels of Hisana and Ichigo leaving - you give enough of Byakuya to see the strain and the affection there, and OH JESUS FENCING. LIKE. SHE ALWAYS NEEDS A SWORD. ALWAYS.

Thinking about it now, she cannot remember or pinpoint when she sort of fell for him, or when the crush became that crush, or when he stood as a distraction for her too, in the worst possible way. What she remembers most is that he noticed her and if anything, if anything at all, that meant too much even then.

This just made me weep a little. It's so true, and it works so well for her. BUT IT'S JUST SO TRUE.

It doesn’t matter though. Ichigo agrees.

“Especially when she fences,” he says. “It’s beautiful.”

She cannot laugh it off as teasing.

LEAVE ME HERE TO DIE. (THIS IS JUST NOT EVEN A LITTLE COHERENT.)

The way he would stupidly ruffle her hair and how she just wanted him to stop; she

[mylasia]

I've been looking forward to a new fic from you. 8D
Love this like you wouldn't believe. I don't think I've read any fic (that I liked, anyways) that placed Rukia as being younger and so involved with Karin. It's a fresh perspective and I love seeing how their relationship could still come together even under circumstances that are so different.

Hands down the best ten minute break I've ever taken!
*scurries back to churn out paper*

[hellequin01]

This is such a good story I can hardly believe it. Seriously. I love AUs, but good ones are hard to come by, and this is one is absolutely amazing. It broke my heart in all the right places.

[hariboo]

OH GOD, THIS.

a not highschool highschool AU!

I just can't deal with all of this. It's perfect and fencing! Karin!!!!! He left and came back but Hisana didn't and oh oh Byakuya! Why do you give such feelings?