Bleach Fic: for all the things that we don't say

Dec 19, 2011 12:39

Sappy, sappy, sappy, sappy. So sappy. Sappy to the power of three. Or simply put, things I text Emma when I'm bored. Or trying not to kill my roommate. Or both.

for all the things that we don't say
you and i, we move to the beat of our own drum. ichigo, rukia, and the point of intersection. bleach | ichigo/rukia | general, future fic | 2,656 words ( Read more... )

show: bleach, book: bleach, pairing: ichigo/rukia

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vince_moon December 19 2011, 20:32:30 UTC
Beautiful. The raw emotions in this are so powerful. Absolutely beautiful.

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fated_addiction December 19 2011, 22:42:29 UTC
Thank you!

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kane_shi_megami December 19 2011, 21:11:54 UTC
<# LOVE

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fated_addiction December 19 2011, 22:42:41 UTC
Thank you!

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mylasia December 19 2011, 22:27:02 UTC
I started reading your H/Hr a long time ago, and you have no idea how glad I am that you're writing for ichiruki now too!

And d'awwww, that was gorgeous. You have this really quiet way of writing that makes my breath hitch and it just kinda brings on this full-body /sigh/. I'm really glad we get to see the beginning of this series (I'm assuming this is in the same universe as your last two pieces?).

Just a quick note though, there's some typos sprinkled throughout (missing words, words that you'd probably meant to delete, and misspellings and what not, seems more to be the fault of whatever word processor you were typing on that yourself), so you might wanna look at that.

I really do love your IR though! They just get more and more in-character (not that they were very ooc in the first place), and your Ichigo! Your Ichigo is magnificent here. :) Great job!

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fated_addiction December 19 2011, 22:46:07 UTC
Hahaha thank you on both counts - I actually c/p from the wrong document, ugh.

It can fit in the last 'verse, haha, and maybe unintentionally so - but it can definitely stand alone too as well. Anyways. Thank you so much!

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tosca1390 December 20 2011, 01:16:56 UTC
I had to wait a solid eight hours to be able to put words in coherent sentences over this because oh my god. I am always amazed at how I can badger you over one tiny head canon thing, and all of a sudden you have an entire slice of life fleshed out. TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE, BASICALLY.

Anyway. FEELINGS.

Just the casual feel of them studying together, and then how one simple question devolves into the entire scope of what they've dealt with and how they're still dealing with it. It just KILLS ME. You get that so well, C. So so well, and I just love the two of them here, and the ring and the secretly married and just - just EVERYTHING.

LETTERS. LETTERS. HE WROTE LETTERS. AND THEN SPOONING. AND THEN LETTERS. A BOX OF THEM. JESUS CHRIST, I'M JUST DEAD FROM FEELINGS. DEAD. I WANT ALL THE SAP, IF THIS IS WHAT IT IS. ALL OF IT.

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OH AND BY THE BY tosca1390 December 20 2011, 03:55:25 UTC
It's back to old habits, the two of them spread over his bed, buried in books and notes and school uniforms all the same. It's how she likes to watch him, even knowing that he knows that she does it too; Ichigo is quieter like this, reserved even, and it makes her wonder what life might have been like had they met this way.

YOU DO UNDERSTAND I NOW HAVE A NON-SOUL-REAPER AU STARTED WHERE THEY JUST MEET, RIGHT? RIGHT.

Jesus Christ, man. At least I have stuff to keep me busy over the horrible holiday. ILU.

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twistedsheets10 December 20 2011, 02:53:54 UTC
/sigh

That was just.

Lovely. ♥

Reading your stuff is always such a pleasure.

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