Sailor Moon Fic: untitled-4

[fated_addiction]

This most definitely should have been posted earlier. But I kind of, sort of threw my back out. So in order to avoid pain and things of that nonsense, here we are. I'm slowly catching up on comments too.

For my girls, and of course, of course, tosca1390. ♥ You should really invest some time in their SM fic as well - perfect, perfect, perfect

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[tosca1390]

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH.

Once my Internet stops fucking around, I an coming back to post the epic comment o have been trying to post for an hour, but for right now: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH FEELINGS FLAWLESS FEELINGS will have to do. Come back for the real comment later, lol.

Also oh my god you threw out your back!!?!? Are you okay? Can I bring you anything? Feel better, bb! ilu.

ahhhhh my internet is finally working omg monster comment commencing now

[tosca1390]

LOOK. WEEPING. RIGHT HERE. Can we just talk about how flawless this is?

"I did something," she repeats. "My skin feels like it's ready to crawl off of me."

"You're tired," he says instead, and she has every inclination to roll her eyes. She's just interested in the truth, she wants to say. "You should rest."

"I just want someone to give me a straight answer." Her mouth thins. "Is it really that hard?"

USAGI YES. UGH. Their banter is so fucking good. FUCK. Of course she wants answers, and jesus I would just be crawling out of my skin too if no one was telling me anything.

AND THEN YOU PUT ALL TEN OF THEM TOGETHER IN THE SAME ROOM AND THE ANGELS SANG AND THERE WAS BANTER AND I WEPT BUCKETS OF JOY. (I can't turn the CAPS off).

"They're cut from the same cloth," Minako says. She nods to Zane too and then Kris, who appears in the kitchen for some water. He ruffles Shingo's hair. "They've always picked each other. They will pick each other before they pick you

[hariboo]

i LOVE YOU SO MUCH. LIKE THIS. IS AMAZING. I just really love what you're building and how the guys are closing ranks around her which is fine but they're not her guard and part of her feels that. The instant the girls come in and she relaxes because part of her gets it there are her girls. They love her and protect her. And MINAKO. THE CONVERSATION WITH HER. Ugh, kill me with my feelings.

"They've always picked each other. They will pick each other before they pick you." -- FEELINGS. AND THEN "Just someone I love." !!!!! everything is explained right there and the implication that Minako will pick the girls and Usagi of them is hiding under those words too because the senshi are cut from the twin cloth.

[jenbunny]

I am loving this story so very very much. It is like my favorite story in all the internet at this particular moment in time. I'm just loving what is being built here. I can't wait to see what happens next ^_____^

[torigates]

FEELINGS EVERYWHERE I WANT TO DIE THIS IS SO GOOD!!!! Oh man, that ending scene !!!! just, wow. All the feelings. I love this so much!