Sailor Moon Fic: let's leave men to their gods

[fated_addiction]

By now, I'm pretty sure that no one is surprised. I'm not surprised. I spent six hours yesterday talking about this, so. There's that. Anyways. This is for the incredible and absolutely lovely tosca1390 and of course, the equally lovely hariboo_smirks. And the booze that I finally have. So. I need icons. I think there's that too.

let's leave men to their godsthey say

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[tosca1390]

I AM JUST CRYING RIGHT NOW, C.

OH MY GOD.

This is fucking perfect.

"I have to fight," she says.

His eyes are dark. "No." His mouth sets. "I know what you're thinking."

"I'm not stupid," she hisses. Her eyes flash and there is a low light between them, the crystal dangles and then sets itself against her throat, over the same chain that keeps her locket.

They stare at each other. His eyes are hard. Then he has a fist in her hair, pulling her to him. She slams her mouth against his first though. She kisses with her teeth, biting at his lip and it's that sudden, desperate need to reassure herself that he's here and she's here and that maybe, just maybe, in the middle of all of this, it's going to be a very real second chance.

She pours herself into the kiss too. Her tongue sweeps along his mouth. His hand drops and grasps her hard at the hip. He moans and she gasps and between them, something seems to settle back into place.

This is how it all goes to hell.Weeping and just clutching my heart

[fated_addiction]

I'm finally catching up on comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, lady! BUT THIS ISN'T ALL. I think I'm processing all levels of our conversation from yesterday.

andnowiwanttowriteasequelcompanionwhatever.

So. You know.

♥

[tosca1390]

I mean, I'm--I've re-read it twice now, I can't get over it. I just can't. So. Many. Feelings. I want so much from this verse, so much from it!

[fated_addiction]

I can't decide what I want to do next! I have feelings! Sequel or SM, SM or the sequel! Womanizing Endymoin and not so amused Senshi! as;dklasjdklaskl;j

I CAN'T DECIDE.

[magisterequitum]

Oh my god, I love this so much.

This is beautiful and heartbreaking and so perfect.

[magisterequitum]

And oh god that ending line! JUST KILL ME DEAD.

[fated_addiction]

Ahhhhh! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[risesandtides]

Eeeeep. I am so in love with this. What's more, I am in love with the fact that I found this on the same night I was feeling bummed, thinking about how I haven't seen any new, quality Sailor Moon fan fiction in so long.

I'll collect my thoughts and be back for a coherent review, I promise.

[fated_addiction]

Thank you so much! ♥

[hariboo]

I came from tosca's lj straight to your so my feelings may still totally raw.

This is so perfect!! USAGI STRUGGLING WITH NOT BEING THE PRINCESS. And Minako pretending but teaching and watching because she needs to make sure and know. The connection with Mamoru still being so present but now there's a guilty there too and bc it's Usagi she doesn't feel comfortable with it or even understand it's guilt -- it's just uncomfortable bc it feels off.

So many amazing lines! Minako's little cues!

"So you're hers. I accept that," she says. Her fingers are digging into the knob. "But remember," she tells him. "I loved you first." -- MY TEARS, TASTE THEM

[fated_addiction]

I just unleashed 10K of Silver Millennium stuff, but I'm so, so, so glad you enjoyed it! I just want to roll around in all of this and go buy myself all the manga because that's what I want to hug when I go to bed because of all my FEELINGS.

♥ ♥

Thanks lady!

[jenbunny]

oh my goodness, this was just so ... well perfect. I'm crying now, but I love it. It was so well written. I think I just love your writing style. I'm going to have to look back and see what else you've written that I might have missed because these last few fics that I've read have just been amazing!

[fated_addiction]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.