Comments | fated_addiction: Fic: the weaver, circe

fated_addiction

Fic: the weaver, circe

May 13, 2010 15:46

the weaver, circe
lost ; charlotte/jacob ; 3,812 words ; PG13
hell is other people. slight spoilers for across the sea.

notes: At this point, you should know that I can pretty much be talked into anything? Especially when falseeeyelashes dangles it in front of me when I’m otherwise delirious and supposed to be working? Haha. This is for you, bb. ILU.

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show: lost, pairing: jacob/charlotte, character: charlotte lewis, character: jacob without the dream coat

Comments 10

falseeeyelashes May 13 2010, 21:25:57 UTC

AHHHH! You, I adore! I'm about to take a shower (lol, what have my study breaks become???) but I plan on reading this tonight when I need to step away from the hell known as property law. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!

ILU&hearts

fated_addiction May 13 2010, 21:36:12 UTC

Haha. I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT? It got away for me, that's for sure.

falseeeyelashes May 14 2010, 22:51:16 UTC

CHRISSSSSY! Okay, so after the world's longest nap, lol, I finally sat down and read this and gave it the attention it deserves, and omg. I really, really love this. You do such a wonderful job of capturing Charlotte's voice, the bitterness and resignation of it all. And the relationship between her and Jacob! There's such a real sense of loneliness you create between them that is incredibly believable, especially given the amount of resentment you charge Charlotte with. And, um, hi, sex on the beach, never hotter.

Basically I love you for writing this, and you have basically elevated these two into being a real thing for me, hahaha. ILU! &hearts

fated_addiction May 15 2010, 16:25:12 UTC

Haha. You convinced me! Then again, I'm pretty easy. But I'm so glad you enjoyed it. She was a ton of fun to write, Charlotte.

ILU! ♥

boones May 14 2010, 02:50:09 UTC

AH! I HAVE TO GET UP EXTREMELY EARLY FOR SOME BREAKFAST AT SCHOOL BUT I AM READING THIS ASAP.

I am so intrigued!

fated_addiction May 14 2010, 03:00:30 UTC

YAY BUT BOO FOR YOUR BREAKFAST?

I hope you enjoy it!

boones May 15 2010, 21:44:27 UTC

It's so gorgeous!
I love how I'm seriously shipping them now.

zauberer_sirin May 14 2010, 17:45:58 UTC

wow, wow, wow.

I never thought I wanted to read about charlotte/jacob. obviously you have proved me wrong. my favourite bit is: It takes a few days, if they’re really days.

“I’m dead. I’m dead,” she says out loud. It’s like practice.

fated_addiction May 15 2010, 16:25:43 UTC

Haha. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

valhalla37 May 17 2010, 19:06:34 UTC

WOW.

This is absolutely phenomenal! There's something I really love about Charlotte/Jacob without ever having much cared for Jacob on his own, and this totally elevates the pairing to a whole new, awesome high. It's just dripping with resignation and bitterness and frustration, and I love the interplay between the two of them -- that Charlotte's still coming to terms, that Jacob sort of lets her come to the answers instead of revealing them. It makes for an incredible sense of atmosphere.

And Charlotte! I don't think I've read a more perfect interpretation of her POV in ages -- the mingled sense of before and what she's dealing with in the present, the echoes of her family, of Daniel ... just chilling and heart-breaking and a million other things. So, so fantastic.