FNL Fic: you left me to a sidewalk of lamps

[fated_addiction]

1. my paper still sucks. 2. i'm still not amused by Jonathan Swift and his need to get insanely gross when he's being an ass. but then again, I did sign up for this class. 2. this is for saint_renegade. ♥ because she's awesome and i did this, finally. *g*

you left me to a sidewalk of lamps
“sometimes, I just want to be able to have the choice to go and do

Comments

[randomneses]

Swift is the one who did the thing about eating babies, right? If so, read that in 10th grade and for an exercize we all had to write our out satires.

[fated_addiction]

Hahaha. I'm currently writing your prompt - but yes. He also wrote 'the Lady's Dressing Room' which is kind of a gross, really anti-feminist criticism. Or really, a poem that he wrote because he got dumped. At least, it's what it feels like.

[randomneses]

Yay! Ha, I'm currently writing my own fic/not working on homework D:

And lolz, you're probably right.

[welurklate]

And she has a yeah and maybe somewhere, but doesn’t use it. She’s never really used any of them with him.

Oh you. This was so, so good, darling. I sort of love them more than I have ANY reason to. THANK YOU <3

[zauberer_sirin]

this is so gorgeous and lush and evocative. I am out of loop with FNL but I love your take on the characters.

#2 is my favourite. A bad influence indeed.

[livlovlaugh]

I think these two could have been something. If there were more scenes of them together, they could have been something.

Gorgeous writing. I love the first part. ♥

[afrocurl]

There's something very melancholy about these, but it fits them both. They're trapped in a world they don't fit into, and neither can say anything about to anyone else.

The last moment hits that message home.