Sí. Absolutamente muy bien. Your voices are so credible, even when it's only a few lines. Especially when it's only a few lines. Love the presentation, too.
Btw, will download your mix, just to listen to another cover of Enjoy The Silence. Thank you much. :)
I really, really love this, bb. The "love story blurbs" paired with the pictures works so, so effectively.
For whatever reason, I really adored this line: “She’s lucky,” and he can’t remember her name, Audrey or Hannah or Josie like the pussycat, “she’s real lucky.” But, really. The whole thing is just fantastic. I've always loved your original stuff. For sure.
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He shakes his head and turns a little, a small smile splitting his face. Her lips purse and she stays where she is, pressing her boots into the grass.
“I’m sorry, you know,” he tells her. “I wanted to do better.”
Beautifully put. I like the softness in your writing here. Its more than a little heartbreaking - which I adore.
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This was amazing, Chrissy. You should be a professional writer. I'm not exaggerating.
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Btw, will download your mix, just to listen to another cover of Enjoy The Silence. Thank you much. :)
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For whatever reason, I really adored this line: “She’s lucky,” and he can’t remember her name, Audrey or Hannah or Josie like the pussycat, “she’s real lucky.” But, really. The whole thing is just fantastic. I've always loved your original stuff. For sure.
And that last bit? LOVE, love, love.
ILU.
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